[ The sobbing isn't quiet. It's the kind of sobbing that comes from raw emotion that is simply impossible to contain.
She'd been in denial as much as he had, in the end, and the truth hits her like a wrecking ball.
Around them, the memoryscape starts to fog and fade, but she never stops sobbing. ]
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[ The sobbing isn't quiet. It's the kind of sobbing that comes from raw emotion that is simply impossible to contain.
She'd been in denial as much as he had, in the end, and the truth hits her like a wrecking ball.
Around them, the memoryscape starts to fog and fade, but she never stops sobbing. ]